Laura Moyer is a compulsive copy editor who reads the AP Stylebook for fun.
July 19th, 2012, 3:40 pm
And the problem is?
Take a look at the first sentence of this press release my colleague Bill Tolbert received for inclusion in our Communities section.
There’s something perplexing here—and I’m not referring to the recently/recently repetition or the two periods at the end of the sentence.
If you received this press release, what would you question?
Here’s a hint and also a warning: If you don’t live in this area, you probably won’t get the answer.
Click on the image to enlarge.
Permalink: http://news.fredericksburg.com/theredpen/2012/07/19/and-the-problem-is-2/
